Perspective Project Comments

1. Benjamin Dreiker & Spencer Haberman: good image, clear concept, maybe change the background to indicate that he’s a baker, could add more details (have him holding a cooking utensil, wear an apron with stains, wear an oven mitt, etc.), can’t tell that it’s a cake (add details to indicate so if necessary)
2. Michael Ciluffo, Dominic Gallone & Connor Zazzo: cool concept, maybe show more of the goal to indicate that it’s the goalie, nice details building the tension
3. Jeslin Ritz & Berkley Whaley: interesting concept but maybe show more of the bottom of the trunk to get an idea that the person’s being enclosed in it, good background setting but maybe use a male figure closing the trunk, nice angle
4. Megan Kiley & Stevie Ruzich: good idea combining the pictures, maybe use a different name for the contact to make it more realistic, good idea using the text to set the scene, the peephole in the middle is kind of confusing, might be stronger if the boy was facing the “peephole,” maybe use arrows or something to show the progression
5. Andrea Diaz & Peter Insdorf: good idea but confusing angle
6. Frank Calo & Tara O’Connor: nice variety of perspectives, maybe space the sides more to indicate that the top and bottom are related, interesting set of photos put together
7. Erin Brockman & Alex Medvedev: clear idea, great image details (hands, books, pen, drink, backpack, setting, blackboard, people, etc.), good camera angle
8. Micaela Figueroa & Jennifer McElroy: nice idea, maybe put people in the seats or darken it more, maybe show a little more in the second image, third image is the most visually intriguing, put both images together for the second project maybe, interesting concept for the second project, maybe crop the white out a bit and show more of the metal machine for the second project
9. Kofi French Cudjoe & Elizabeth Lynch: very interesting image, a little confusing conceptually